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response/reaction essay to Adora Svitak's TED presentation.we saw TED in writting class.It was Adora's sppeech.
She said adult can learn from kids.
Adora looked like 11-12years old.
But she is very brave that she could speech infront of hundred of people.
She like to write novel so, she made her own book.
And i agree with her opinion.
Adult can learn from kids and they should listen to kids.
Your response is very short... too short. You have written that you agree with her views, but you haven't taken the time to explain why. This is the purpose of writing a response: to give a fully thought out answer.
답글삭제If you follow the writing format that we talked about in class and is explained on my blog, it will help you to organize and express your ideas.
I know you can do better. I look forward to reading your next response.